My First YouTube Video Ad: Opinions Please…

Hi all. If I could get some feedback on this I’d be very, very grateful:


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6 Responses to “My First YouTube Video Ad: Opinions Please…”

  1. Dave Davis September 21, 2007 at 1:28 am #

    So far so good. I would maybe put an image of your product at the end though.

  2. Jim Provost September 21, 2007 at 4:40 am #

    … but a paper organizer wouldn’t survive the water balloon either…

  3. ian September 21, 2007 at 8:54 am #

    Oh, come now. The pages might curl, and the ink might run a bit, but all is not lost.
    We’re about to do another with a laptop getting smashed into tiny pieces, as well…

  4. Dave Davis September 22, 2007 at 4:39 am #

    Maybe have a football hit it? Have it fall to the ground?

  5. Linda September 25, 2007 at 11:36 am #

    As a mom, I found it a bit unlikely that a Mom would have her laptop open, unattended, with kids and water balloons running around it. And the Treo next to it, so any bum at the park could swipe it.
    How about if Mom is actually sitting at it trying to get some work done at the park while her kids are running around? Then the water balloon, or even a water bottle gets knocked by a frisbee or ball.

  6. popup May 26, 2009 at 7:00 am #

    very funny