Your Big Chance to Critique My Work

I’m trying a bit of my own internet direct marketing techniques this week, with a promotion around my company’s new consulting programs:

I would greatly appreciate any feedback folks might have…

Alain Jourdier February 9, 2007 at 12:59 pm #
Ian, I like what your offering. My only critique is that there’s just way too much information for one page….can you break it down?
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ian February 9, 2007 at 1:19 pm #
Hi Alain,
An interesting point. I’ve pondered breaking it up into pages and kept it as one in the tradition of the long sales letter.
I may try both and test them against each other…
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