Turnabout Is Fair Play

OK, here’s your big chance. Usually I type from my high horse, critiquing other folks’ mistakes. Now you get to knock me down a peg or two.
My company, Portent Interactive, has launched a new service: ClickSight. ClickSight is a web analytics service that lets you actually see where folks click on a given page of your site.

Hopefully, ClickSight fills that role by providing an actual picture of usage levels on a site. So here’s what I’d like: Visit the ClickSight page on our web site. Read it, have a look, kick the tires a bit. Then e-mail me two things I could improve, from a marketing perspective. Is the message clear? Is my copy decent? (realize that I wrote it at 5 AM) What else could improve?
The best suggestions will earn you a review of your web site, by yours truly. Free consulting time in exchange for your thoughts – what could be better?
Here’s the page in question: ClickSight Web Analytics.